What is woo-woo? I know you didn’t ask, but I’ll tell
you anyway. Woo-woo is a statement or assertion based on supernatural or
pseudo-scientific beliefs. Renowned skeptic, Michael Shermer, describes the
words of Deepak Chopra as woo-woo. And if you watch their debates you can see
why. However, I don’t think it has been applied to opinions on writing. But
having read Jonathan Franzen’s 10 rules for novelists, I was inspired to offer
an additional meaning for your consideration. Def: 1. (slang) noun. Nonsensical writing advice, presented
as objective truth, based on nothing more substantial than personal beliefs, emotions,
and an overall need to feel special and clever. Too much wine and an overblown
ego can dramatically increase the volume of woo-woo produced. Def: 2 (slang) verb. When a writer is deliberately
vague to appear intelligent and insightful. As with definition #1 wine and ego
are common factors.
There you have it. Writer’s woo-woo as defined by
yours truly. You may or may not agree, but that’s fine. I’m often wrong. You’ll
need to be the judge. So without further ado, I give you (drum roll) writer’s
woo-woo as represented by Jonathan Franzen.
1. The
reader is a friend, not an adversary, not a spectator.
And we kick it off with a healthy dose of woo-woo.
This is meant to sound as if he has some mystical bond with the reader; some
insight beyond the understanding of mere mortals. It screams, I’m wise! I’m
clever! I possess a level of comprehension that surpasses the reach of the
common rabble. To which I say: whatever, dude.
2. Fiction
that isn’t an author’s personal adventure into the frightening or the
unknown isn’t worth writing for anything but money.
This particular woo-woo is meant to give you the
impression that a “real” writer writes for the sheer joy of the experience with
no regard for financial considerations. While I agree that you should write
what you love, and the expectation of vast riches when becoming and author is
ill-advised, there is nothing wrong with paying the bills. You are not a sell-out
because you make money. And you are not an artist because you don’t.
3. Never use the word then as a conjunction—we
have and for
this purpose. Substituting then is
the lazy or tone-deaf writer’s non-solution to the problem of too
many ands on the
page.
I read this woo-woo, then I laughed. Use the word that fits. There is no “right” way.
Prose is not an immovable obelisk. It’s fluid. If “then” fits, use it.
4. Write in third person unless a
really distinctive first-person voice offers itself irresistibly.
Ah, yes. I remember this from creative writing class.
The absolutes and objective facts the instructor pretended to know and would
spout off as gospel. It’s pure BS. That said, I refer you to my previous
response. There is no “right” way. Craft
your story however you want.
5. When information becomes free and
universally accessible, voluminous research for a novel is devalued along
with it.
Not sure what he’s driving at with this woo-woo. Because
information is freely available, it’s worthless? Or because information is
available to the common clods, research is meaningless? Ugh!
6. The most purely autobiographical fiction
requires pure invention. Nobody ever wrote a more autobiographical story
than The Metamorphosis.
This is woo-woo of the highest order. I’m beginning to
think he fancies himself the Deepak Chopra of literature. Admittedly, I haven’t
read The Metamorphosis. But I know that saying “Nobody ever wrote a more
autobiographical story than The Metamorphosis” as if it’s an
objective fact is ludicrous. For me, The Lord of the Rings is the greatest
fantasy trilogy of all time. Let me repeat that. For me, The Lord of the Rings is the greatest fantasy
trilogy of all time.
7. You see more sitting still than chasing
after.
This woo-woo is vague and meant to seem wise and
introspective. Sounds to me like something you would read in a fortune cookie.
I did look it up to be sure. It’s his own quote, presumably from one of his
books. I guess he really liked it.
8. It’s doubtful that anyone with an Internet
connection at his workplace is writing good fiction.
And from where does your doubt arise? This woo-woo is
simply an injection of bias without evidence to support his assertion. I’m
beginning to think dude should lay off the wine when he writes on his
blog.
9. Interesting verbs are seldom very
interesting.
More woo-woo straight from the mouth of a high school
creative writing teacher. Again, use words that fit.
10. You have to love before you can be
relentless.
And ending with mega woo-woo! He went full Deepak with
this one.
My advice? I
have none to give other than read books that you enjoy. Learn from the authors
who write them. And do your best to improve your skills. There isn’t a right
way. In the end it’s about finding your
way, your voice, and your story.
I loved the book and and am eagerly waiting the next bool in the series. I know Brian has been to his ears in several projects.
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